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Old 30th May 2009, 05:59   #14 (permalink)
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Looks good, as a fellow artist I recommend working on getting into some more detail in the water, you've done a great job adding detail other places, but you have to stay consistent through out so that the mind doesn't get distracted.

The composition is nice, but i'm not sure what I should be looking at specifically, that big firefly could be a nice object but compositionally it could go in a place that gets more attention so you're drawn to it more!

Keep it up.
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