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Old 15th October 2008, 11:13   #1 (permalink)
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Serpent Lord.
Ancient legends and manuskripts say not much about this creature - Serpent Lord. Is it's existance myth or not?..
Some travellers says they saw it flying over a desert, somebody blame it on a death of their friends and relatives, who tried to explore something about Serpent Lord...
But the most mythic and at the same time quite real place of it's inhabitance is Serpent Rock in a desert (omg, I hope there will be any deserts of sand or stone in MO). It's dangerous place because of great amount of poisonous snakes, but the snakes really doesn't crawl away from their stones of Serpent Rock.
But why do so much snakes concentrate in one place? Maybe it's their base or a capital with their snake king?
Mothers freighten their little children with Serpent Lord who will come and take them if they behave bad, but really Serpent Lord never attacked villages or cities. Only some stories from caravan travellers and old night-watchmans in villages not far from Serpent Rock. But do people really believe them?..
And why not to believe? Maybe Serpent Lord guard it's treasures and rule his reptile tribe?
Maybe sometimes Serpent Lord come out and stories about flying snake with butterfly-like wings and strange unusual paws is true?
Maybe it is "sapiens"?


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Overall, I like it. The style of how you wrote the description is pretty lame, but does its job at telling "how mysterious" they are. The drawing is good, albeit somewhat messy, but not to a bothering extent.
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