Yeah. The drawing itself is so much better than I could do, hah.
Untalented artists shouldn't really be critics, but here's what I think:
The overall design is just, unexciting. There is nothing that jumps out at me. Nothing that makes the drawing special. With a humanoid creature such as this, a good idea may be to draw on some clothing, trinkets, cultural items, etc. Right now it's just a bit plain is all.
Could have leather skin armour on the legs. Items hanging off of his horns, maybe one of the horns is broken. Nose ring. You get the picture.
Anyway, besides that, it's an excellent drawing. It's very impressive, now it just needs the details to push it over the top. ;D
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