Fantastic, Rinelin! I agree with Catmorbid, it would be wonderful (and frightening) to be wandering through a dark forest and spy this creature moving toward you. Bravo!
I also think the name is perfect for this beast.
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"Be humble.
Only fools take pride in their station here, trapped in
a cage of dust, moisture, heat and air.
No need to complain of calamities,
this illusion of a life lasts but a moment."
~Shaikh Abu Saeed Abil Kheir
(Explorer 80%, Socializer 60%, Killer 40%, Achiever 20%)
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